Caiti, you did a good job with this! All the guys shine so brightly and you make good use of their canon skills and qualities while integrating them into this completely new AU. There are a lot of beautiful little touches in here (I have so many questions about Chris being related to Death and marrying a mortal and fathering a child and then losing them, and being incapable of saving them!) and the bonds between all the guys come through strong and clear. I think my favourite line was this because I could hear the droll tones of Ezra and Chris in my head:
“As I said, it is worth more than most of our lives combined,” Ezra noted. “Oh, yes, before I forget, Mr. Larabee….”
“I know,” interrupted Chris. “In return for the loan, my cousins expect me to stop by for dinner.”
*chortles* I hope you continue with this AU. It's a lot of fun and now that the establishing story is out of the way, I imagine there must be a hundred things you could do in that world.
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but not an Angel either...