I'm no expert on zombie fics, but I thought you did a great job with this story and the subject. It was good to have Nathan also know the lore, not that it made it any easier when they had to execute those who had been infected. I'm also glad that the shot missed when Chris went down, and that Chris didn't get infected. The only thing missing at the end is whether or not J.D. survived.

I also liked the image for the story - very nicely done.

Thanks for sharing.